Diego Vargas
February 6, 2020
There was a guy named Dave. One day, Dave stayed up all night watching tv. But he regonized that he had school in the morning. When Dave went to school he told his friends that while he was up all night he found this challenge. It was a sleeping challenge he found and told his friends that next week he is going to start the challenge. One of Dave’s friends named Dan said he was going to do the challenge with him.
So next week, Dan and Dave went to bed then something usual happened. Both Dan
And Dave slept for one week as soon they wake up they notice something different in their rooms.
Dave went to a calendar and found out that the year was 2100 then Dan began to look out his window.
What Dan saw is that the little town they were in was gone. Later then, Dan put on his clothes, went outside, and he realized they were in the middle of nowhere. Dan said to himself “I wonder where am I at.” Until Dan found Dave then Dan said “Dave what was this challenge about.” Dave said “This was a challenge I found on a random website on the internet and I thought you and me can do this challenge together.” As soon the boys were talking Dan found this person walking.
Dan shouted “Hey over here we need help!” The person saw them but he couldn’t
understand them because English doesn’t exist in 2100. As soon he saw them he walked up to them and spoke to them in his language. Dave and Dan looked confuse and could not understand him. The guy then did sign language so the boys could understand him. Then Dave was like in his mind “I wonder what is he trying to say.” Then the guy made a sign to follow him then the boys followed him.
The man took them to a little building that is high tech and with special machines
Inside. The boys were like “The time we live in we don’t have high technology then this.” Then the man said in his language that they need to find parts to this special machine but, if they don’t they will be stuck in 2100 forever. When he said that the boys freaked out because they miss their family and friends back home.
As soon he told them, they began to look for the parts. The problem is that the parts
scattered everywhere and are hidden. The man handed them a special gadget that helps them find parts to the machine. Then the boys reached to this lake and near a bush, there was a gadget started to beep, the boys were excited and they grabbed the part now all they need is two more parts.
When they arrived to this abandoned house, as soon they went to a old chair with the
Gadget started to beep and they took it with them. The boys were excited because all they need is one more part and the they can go home. Next, they crossed this river and then they came down to the river. They drank the water because it was clean. One of them said that was the cleaniest water they ever drank. When Dave went to this tree he said “Dan come here there is something special.” As soon Dan went there he pulled out his gadget and he yelled “This is the one let’s go home!”
The boys ran to the house where the man helped them and gave him the parts. He
Then put the parts together and the machine started to vibrate. The boys step in and said to the guy bye. Then the guy waved and took them into a tunnel of lines. When the machine was in their year Dan finally said “Its good to be home.”
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
I needed to think a little bit on the timeline part because I tried to make the events that are most likely to happen in 2100 and right now.
Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
Its narrative because there is a narrator telling the story what the boys did and how they traveled.
Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
What I learned is that in a narrative story there is gotta be a lot of dialogue
What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
I am proud of that I think my story is good.
What does this paper show readers about you?
It shows that I am interested about the future
February 6, 2020
There was a guy named Dave. One day, Dave stayed up all night watching tv. But he regonized that he had school in the morning. When Dave went to school he told his friends that while he was up all night he found this challenge. It was a sleeping challenge he found and told his friends that next week he is going to start the challenge. One of Dave’s friends named Dan said he was going to do the challenge with him.
So next week, Dan and Dave went to bed then something usual happened. Both Dan
And Dave slept for one week as soon they wake up they notice something different in their rooms.
Dave went to a calendar and found out that the year was 2100 then Dan began to look out his window.
What Dan saw is that the little town they were in was gone. Later then, Dan put on his clothes, went outside, and he realized they were in the middle of nowhere. Dan said to himself “I wonder where am I at.” Until Dan found Dave then Dan said “Dave what was this challenge about.” Dave said “This was a challenge I found on a random website on the internet and I thought you and me can do this challenge together.” As soon the boys were talking Dan found this person walking.
Dan shouted “Hey over here we need help!” The person saw them but he couldn’t
understand them because English doesn’t exist in 2100. As soon he saw them he walked up to them and spoke to them in his language. Dave and Dan looked confuse and could not understand him. The guy then did sign language so the boys could understand him. Then Dave was like in his mind “I wonder what is he trying to say.” Then the guy made a sign to follow him then the boys followed him.
The man took them to a little building that is high tech and with special machines
Inside. The boys were like “The time we live in we don’t have high technology then this.” Then the man said in his language that they need to find parts to this special machine but, if they don’t they will be stuck in 2100 forever. When he said that the boys freaked out because they miss their family and friends back home.
As soon he told them, they began to look for the parts. The problem is that the parts
scattered everywhere and are hidden. The man handed them a special gadget that helps them find parts to the machine. Then the boys reached to this lake and near a bush, there was a gadget started to beep, the boys were excited and they grabbed the part now all they need is two more parts.
When they arrived to this abandoned house, as soon they went to a old chair with the
Gadget started to beep and they took it with them. The boys were excited because all they need is one more part and the they can go home. Next, they crossed this river and then they came down to the river. They drank the water because it was clean. One of them said that was the cleaniest water they ever drank. When Dave went to this tree he said “Dan come here there is something special.” As soon Dan went there he pulled out his gadget and he yelled “This is the one let’s go home!”
The boys ran to the house where the man helped them and gave him the parts. He
Then put the parts together and the machine started to vibrate. The boys step in and said to the guy bye. Then the guy waved and took them into a tunnel of lines. When the machine was in their year Dan finally said “Its good to be home.”
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
I needed to think a little bit on the timeline part because I tried to make the events that are most likely to happen in 2100 and right now.
Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
Its narrative because there is a narrator telling the story what the boys did and how they traveled.
Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
What I learned is that in a narrative story there is gotta be a lot of dialogue
What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
I am proud of that I think my story is good.
What does this paper show readers about you?
It shows that I am interested about the future